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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hello! When I saw on the thread that you're written about love in two Malfoy generations, I decided to make them the first entries I read.

In this piece, I like how you've focused on how Draco's conduct with Astoria didn't fit with his parents' expectations. When their world and their fundamental beliefs had been extinguished, it makes sense that they'd try to stick to at least their standards.

But it's also logical that as time went on, things as such became more common and it was nice to see Narcissa take Draco's side despite her differences with his system of thought.

It was also rather nice to see Draco so scared and hesitant when, and I know this because I read part one, his parents were always so straightforward with their decisions and really knew what they wanted and got it. But it's understandable that Draco's experience during the war would've changed him, making him doubt that things will always go the way he wanted.

And I understand that this is a story about his trying to acquire the strength to propose, but I wish you'd included one moment where they were happy just as they were. There surely must've been some of these for them to put up with their lifestyle for so long without either of them demanding a change. But that's just my personal opinion.

I think this is a nice piece and matches its companion in lightness. Great job and good luck!

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