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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! Thank you so much for entering the Uncomfortable Challenge!

Wow, this was a really great one-shot! The whole time I was reading I was full immersed in Ginny's memories - I think you did a really good job both with the prompt, and at being Ginny.

I really loved the memories you chose to incorporate in this piece - like the Valentine's Day of Ginny's first year at Hogwarts, where she sent Harry a singing dwarf. The way you described that really stuck out to me, and made me smile.

And I liked that you mentioned a bit of the war, too, because obviously that is a very important time in Ginny's life - Harry had broken up with her and she had no idea where he was, Death Eaters were ruling the school and yet she still attempted to celebrate Valentine's Day.

I loved the slight twist at the end - I totally thought that it was Harry who had died, but when I found out that in fact Ginny was dead...that was a really cool idea!

This was an awesome one-shot!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! Ahh, I am so sorry it's taken me such a long time to respond to this wonderful review! I'm travelling and have been without internet for the past few weeks.

Thank you, I am so happy to hear that you think I did well with the prompt and writing Ginny!

I'm glad you liked the range of memories too - I think the Deathly Hallows era would have been so differentfrom Ginny's perspective, and her view on the war during a time that's supposed to be happy seemed important to include. And of course I wanted to put in that silly scene from Chamber of Secrets too!

I am so glad you liked the twist at the end - that idea came to me halfway through writing it and I just couldn't resist. I'm glad it was a surprise ;)

Once again thank you so so much for this lovely review and I apologise for my delayed response! Thanks for the challenge, I really loved participating in it.


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