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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey! Thank you so much for entering the Uncomfortable Challenge!

This was such a sweet, adorable one-shot! It was so much fun to read and made me feel all warm and happy inside! Which is definitely a good thing, considering it is rather cold today and snowing heavily outside.

Anyway, I really loved the conversation between Tonks and Remus. I think you characterized them both perfectly - which I'm guessing (I've never written about Remus or Tonks so I wouldn't know) would be a bit of a challenge, as we don't really know a lot about their relationship. I especially liked your portrayal of Remus - trying to deny and forget his feelings for Tonks.

And then the mention of Sirius and the Dog Star at the end was just so perfect, it melted my heart! I really felt for poor Remus, being the only marauder left - well, there's Peter, but he's a complete rat, so he doesn't really count!

Anyway, this was a great one-shot, I really enjoyed it!


Author's Response: That's alright, it was a brilliantly awesome challenge and I had a lot of fun! :D

Thank you, I'm glad that it made you feel warm and happy inside, I wanted to have a cute one shot between Remus and Tonks, I don't think that they have many moments to be like that during the war.

Thank you, I've never written them before so I was really worried about how I would get them across.

Ah that part melted my heart too, I hadn't planned it until Remus was looking up at the sky and it just hit me. Oh no, Peter doesn't count at all!

Thank you so much! :D

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