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Review:Whimsical Diva says:
Am warming to Rose, but am still Team Matt. He and Rose make a lovely couple; Scorose sure needs more fleshing out and more development to emerge as the winner against Mattrose. Scorpius is being an utter plonker; but then I remember being none too enamoured by Rise a couple of chapters ago and feeling she isn't deserving of Scorpius but now feel the opposite. Sort of. It's a bit of all or nothing with Scorp - either he is amazing or he's tiresome.

Wonder if Saida's trying to infiltrate the gang? Rose should be able to out her, shouldn't she, what with her Legilimency skills? Or maybe Saida's a more accomplished Occlumens than Paquet. And btw, if Thane and co are keeping tabs on the gangs' shenanigans, do they know about the whole Paquet affair?

Can't wait for the heist. Update ASAP.

Author's Response: If nobody out there rooted for Mattrose I wouldn't be doing my job nicely. They are meant to have chemistry and work well together - they're also meant to have some serious reasons as to why they don't, but if they couldn't spend an evening at a fancy place together talking and laughing, it'd be a sorry and weak sort of triangle.

Scorpius IS being a plonker. This is kind of meant to be the hissyfit to properly resolve the fundamental issues beneath his plonkering, because frankly *I* would lose respect for Rose if she remained in a relationship with a guy who's going to do this kind of thing over and over. He has reasons but needs to learn that reasons aren't excuses, and that there are ways to deal with this.

Rose would hypothetically be able to out someone trying to infiltrate the gang, yes, but her Legilimency is not discreet. Not only would she need to have reason to check someone's mind, she'd struggle to do it without them knowing. But that applies to Rose's Legilmency in any situation for any obstacle.

Thane's lot have the information to piece together that the gang probably have a Legilimens and someone who can mess with memories. The big advantage they have is that the gang don't know they know they're after them. Once they do, it would be a very different ball-game to keep tabs on them.

But we'll see how all that goes. Updates soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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