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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love Mrs. Evans' assumption that Lily must have cast some kind of spell on her sister. It really is the conclusion most people would probably jump to under the circumstances.

Oh, Lily is being a bit bratty, isn't she? Her sister is ill and may need hospitalisation and she is just going on about how she can say what she likes.

Mrs. Evans sounds less impressed with magic here than Petunia implied she was, but then I guess Petunia's point of view isn't exactly unbiased.

And hmm, I wonder how the wizard at the end knows Petunia's name.

Good chapter.

Author's Response: Hi MargaretLane.
Thanks for your boss review.
I agree with your first comment. If you were living in a house with only one wizard slash witch then you'd definitely blame them before thinking of what else could have happened. Also I put Lily being a bit like Moody because she is jealous of Petunia getting all the attention like in the first chapter, Petunia is jealous of Lily and then it switches round if you get it? Yes I thought that as well. Hm yes the wizard knows Petunia's name. How? Well you'll have to find out!
Thanks again,
HEG


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