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Review:shez says:
Hey!

So can I just say I love your banner? Itís EPIC. IĎd favorite this story again just for the banner (your awesome story-telling makes it ten times better though haha).

Harry is quite the angry father---the fact he knows his stolen son has probably been tainted and corrupted but doesnít care because itís his son and he loves him unconditionally---Like in the books, he has a bit of a hero-complex and I wonder how that will fare for him here. From what Iíve seen so far of Devlin, I think itís really going to push Harry to the edge. (Third chapter and as you can see, Iím already trying to predict the end haha).

I don't know if I mentioned this before but I really like that Sirius is alive; that strong emotional attachment he fares with the Potter family is realistic and comforting (I like to know thereís someone there for them) and the scene of him arriving (charmingly) in his boxers adds a bit of levity this dark dark story really needs. I like Alexandria so far but I donít trust heróseeing as she is presumably the child of Voldemort she probably has a dark side to her as well. Iím also wondering if and when weíll be seeing more of Ron and Hermione.

So I feel like Iím missing something very large. I know Devlin has blood ties to Voldemort via Iím assuming Alexandra (speaking of which, how did her and Harry meet? Does he know her background? VOLDEMORTÖ CHILD??? HOW??? Ok, this definitely needs a backstory and if Iím right, I want to know who Mama Voldemort is/was. Like now).

The connect Devlin has with Geoffrey is fascinationónot-quite friend and not-quite parent but for some reason a guardian--Iím curious to know exactly how it originated and learn more about our surprisingly humane (or double-agent?) death-eater.

So I think somethingís wrong, like Iím missing something very big. I donít Voldy would part with Devlin or let himself be deceived so easy so Iím going to say heís planted Devlin there to spy on Harry. I donít know to what extent Geoffry is involved but Iíll gander that he doesnít know. You did have an auror mention that the attacking death-eaters were Ďgoing easyí on them.óso Iím going to say itís a conspiracy.

AWESOME EPIC STORY. IGNORE MY RIDICULOUS PREDICTIONS I DONíT MAKE SENSE WHEN IíM EXCITED.

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