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Review:SilverDarkHorse says:
Yay! Thank you for the very early update! Brilliant first chapter to start off with.

I love the small details that bring out Sirius's development as a parent - worrying about safety on the staircase, Harry's spelling test etc :D

Yay for Remus - he is now a Professor! This changes things with regard to the Philosopher's Stone, does it not? I hope nothing bad happens to Remus - I'm worried about the jinx on the DADA job. It would actually break my heart if something happens to him :'(

So Sirius is going on looong coffee breaks with Marlene, is he? :P And he hasn't told Remus about it? Either he is acting like a sneaky teenage boy or there's a breakdown in communication between the two Marauders - and that thought makes me uneasy :( I hope the Sirius/Marlene dynamic quickens up, we've all waited ages for them :P

I forgot to mention it earlier but Brown is getting comeuppance for that "civilian" jibe - muahaha!

Also very randomly, I remember Sirius drew a picture of Padfoot peeing on the Serpent Sworn symbol - so ironic in hindsight considering they were who gave him his job back! :D

A great first chapter. Would you fill us in on what happened in the interim between Innocent and this? I would love to know!

Cheers mate! (thought it was about time I used Australianisms) :D

Author's Response: You're welcome - I thought it would soften the blow of finishing "Innocent" so suddenly. :P I'm glad you liked it. :)

Haha, lots of people have picked up on that. :)

He is, yes! :D Yes, they certainly will! :P No promises; the curse is very much intact. :S You'll just have to wait and see how things pan out. :)

Haha, yes, he is. :P No - things are still quite fragile between him and Marlene (they'll show up again soon) and he's trying to keep it to himself. :P Remus (rightly) would mock him about it as payback for everything Sirius has said about Tonks. :P It's not a breakdown in communication, it's just Sirius being sneaky. :P

Haha, yes, he is, and excellent memory! :P I was wondering if anyone would pick up on that. :P

Haha, not a huge amount happened, which is why I chose to cut things off where I did; it was mostly Sirius settling into his job, Remus and Tonks spending time together, and with the boys, Harry at school, and working on his incantation, Draco still with Snape, etc. But there will be references to things that happened. :)

You're welcome, mate! :D

Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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