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Review:My Name Does Not Matter says:
OK, first off still going great so keep at it. Two thing i noticed, first i think you missed a word in the sixth line - ..just thought you should 'know' how they work. - sorry. Second, regardless of the internet post at the end Rebecca clearly said to Cheri 'it would be unlikely wed be able to predict HER movements'. This was a huge blunder as she just told a ministry official that it is a girl. This raises questions as to how she knows and could ultimately lead to her capture,(just saying).
Even so still love the story, and way to stick it to her dad.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've corrected both, and yeah... I always seem to create bad-guy dads. Not sure why, because mine's lovely. :/ Thanks for reviewing!

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