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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi!

I'm here for the review battle!

I really love this story, I think it's so incredibly clever and so unique. I really like the way that you portrayed Sirius in this, and Regulus and Barty. I've never read much on the latter two, but the way you write their manerisms in this story seem very believable. I also love your writing of Bellatrix. She's fantastic and her interaction with Sirius was wonderful.

I love the way his mind works, and how he goes through his thought processes. It's nice to see him be so genuine about his feelings and thoughts, especially when his family isn't exactly known for that.

I am really like what you've done with the story, I'll be interested to see how you write the next chapter.

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

I'm so glad you like it! It was a strange idea for me to have, since I'd never written anything like it before, but I just had to write it! I'm so happy you like Sirius - I think I write him a little differently to how most people seem to write him, and Regulus and Barty and Bella. They're all so much fun to write - particularly Bella and Barty!

Thanks! Yeah, I really wanted to show that, despite having differences, he's still similar to various members of his family, but he's definitely a lot more genuine and far less false!

I'm so happy you liked it - thank you so much for the lovely review! :)

Aph xx


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