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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
I loved every bit of this chapter. Wonderful job. I think you really did justice to Albus. It was very touching that Minerva didn't use Albus' chair or office right away, and everyone who spoke at his funeral had very moving things to say. All well written. I liked Dean's portraits too. That one you described with Albus' arms open in welcome would have been the one I missed too. Great pep talk by Harry to the DA at the end as well. It sounds like we have an exciting battle to look forward to as the story goes on. Your action scenes are always well written, so I know you'll do a fantastic job with it. This was a terrific chapter.

One wrong word - it drove a wig between us - LOL, you obviously meant to write wedge.

Author's Response: I realized it could be seen as a bit out of character for Harry to speak at Dumbledore's funeral, but I really wanted to do it.

I still have a lot of work to do on the final battle. I really want to do it justice. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Teddy


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