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Review:alicia and anne says:
Yay! I'm so excited to read this one! :D

How did she screw it all up with Roxanne? Especially if they were close enough before to almost be sisters. It must be something big!

Oh no! They're arguing, it must definitely be something big.

Aw! Oh no! Poor Albus, no wonder Roxanne isn't too happy with her. I wouldn't be either.

Awww Roxanne has kids! :D

Yay! Roxanne is going to do it! I hope it all goes according to plan, I don't want them to get caught or in trouble, I'm worried.

Alicia really need to listen to her sister, shaking him roughly and making him go to the girl and ask her outright would be the better and easier option, but this way is awesome! And action packed :P

I'm worried again about them pulling this plan off, especially that she barely has others to help her. :S

I can't wait for more! The chapters are getting more and more awesome and I can't wait to find out more! :D You're a brilliant writer and I can't help but be hooked by this story!!

You do such a fantastic job!

Author's Response: Wooo! It's great that you're excited for the new chapter! :D

Yeah, Roxanne's not exactly pleased with Alicia. I think it's because she saw first-hand how awful Albus felt, and no-one likes to see their family members being treated horribly. And yes! I actually have a one-shot in the works about Roxanne and her first-born son ^.^

Hehehehe. This is me you're talking to, remember? ;) *cackles evilly* You should be worried. But at the same time, I promise I'll be nice. :P

Yeah, Alicia really /should/ listen to Leanne... but then again, we wouldn't have this novel if she did. I'm glad you like things unfolding this way :P

She may or may not have Marin's help though ;)

Woo, thank you so much! It's so great to hear that you love this story so much and you feel it's improving! Thank you so much for reviewing, Tammi ♥

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