Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Maelody says:
Hey, look at that! I'm finally back! :D I'm so so so excited to actually get to sit down and read this now! :)

Ok, so I really like how this story focuses on how even in the marauder times, not all Slytherins are bad. You don't see that in a lot of marauder fics, and I think it's great to see something new. Melanie and Mandy are a great duo! With being anti-marauders, and not the average Slytherin, they are very likable. I'm still warming up to Charlotte since there hasn't been a whole lot of her yet.

I like how subtle you are when mentioning things that happened in the books. Like the fallout between Lily and Sev. We all know what happened, but if we didn't, it's the perfect amount of information to go off of to know they fell out. And I love your marauders. Especially Remus. I don't know why specifically him, other than how I liked the part where he handed her book back. Peter was pretty cool, too actually. You do your marauders well ;).

Well, I really like it so far. This is my favorite era! So I can't wait to read on!

~Mae

Author's Response: Mae ♥ It's wonderful to see you back!

I'm really glad you like Melanie and Mandy, and the focus on the lesser explored side of Slytherin. Slytherins really don't often get shown in a great light from other POVs but of course they can't all be evil, that would be ridiculous. :p Charlotte does take some warming up to, though.

I'm glad you like the subtlety too. Harry knew a lot about everything but I don't think everyone at the time had all the details the way he did! I think there's quite a few occasions in this fic where the characters have no idea what's going on, but the reader knows. Aah I'm so happy you like my portrayal of the Marauders too! I've always seen Remus as the nicest, and most likely to be friendly to a Slytherin. And though I hate Peter for what he did later, he was their friend at this time so hecan't have been too dislikeable then :p

Thank you so so much for reading and for this lovely surprise review!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 255
Submit Report: