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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Terrific chapter. No worries. I loved the whole thing. The battle was exciting, and heartbreaking. It's always bad news when Bellatrix shows up. That woman is as bad as Nagini, and she's still alive to cause more trouble. I hoped Dumbledore would take her down, but no. Of course, it makes a better story that Harry will have to face Voldemort on his own now. The transition between the battle and the emotional reaction to the casualty was very smooth and well done. It didn't feel rushed or prolonged. I was just swept up in it. The emotional moments were lovely. Excellent writing throughout. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I already knew quite early in the story that Dumbledore would die before Harry faced Voldemort. The death of his mentor forces him to go on without him and trust his own powers and his own abilities, which I think is very important for him.

Killing off Dumbledore is never a popular decision, but I wanted to do it more 'gentle'. He died with Harry beside him and was able to say a few last words to him.

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!

Teddy


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