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Review:MyMyMiss says:
Hi hun! This was a great introduction into what I can tell is going to be an amazing story!
I must admit though, after reading the poem at the start I realized that I was reading the first three lines into the story as a poem too ... derp.

Anyway, I do enjoy a very well written interpretation of the founders/early ear, as the characters are so vivid to the imagination that we can explore so much with their characters, because we know so little about them.
But, I believe, you hit the nail on the head. The way you portrayed each character within this story is amazing, I especially love the way you desribed this...
'Yet there was one form of death which pervaded Master Peverell's knowledge, and it came festered on the hairs of rats from faraway ships, spread as they nibbled at the stores of meat and cheese, exploding in great pustules and grotesque mutations on the faces and skin of the people of Hamlin. This was a time of great despair, of fear, in which Master Peverell worked tirelessly to save those he could and soothe the dying brows of those beyond his help, watching helplessly as their skin began to spell over their eyes, the mouths wrenched in silent screams of burning, internal agony. This was the Black Death, the outbreak of enemy which came swiftly and without warning. Plague.'

That detail, yes that detail right in there, you see it? You re-read what you wrote!! Because it deserves a ten, just for that paragraph!

Amazing work hun, you should be very proud of yourself, and I will be moving on to the next chapter but will possibly review it tomorrow as I have a very bad headache at 1:30a.m in the morning and should be sleeping!!

10/10 xx

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah, thanks so much for coming by and leaving such a wonderful review! :D It really made my day!

Hehe, the poem was mostly written so I could set the tone for writing the story. :P That's actually pretty cool that it had you reading the first few lines like a poem as well.

I love founders as well! There is a lot of freedom within the familiar story, and I had a great time exploring that. I'm really glad you liked all the characters, it means a lot to me!

Aw, you're so sweet! :) I actually did just re-read that and you're making me blush about it now!

Thank you so much for the lovely review, it was so amazing and really means a lot! :D ♥

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