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Review:MargaretLane says:
Wow, just reading the first paragraph, I love your style. And that part about him tripping over his robes made me chuckle.

I like the way she notices little details about him. It makes it sound like she has a crush on him, without her saying so outright.

I also like the way he sits at the Gryffindor table. It kind of gives an indication the war has changed things, though there are still clearly people who cling to the old ways.

Yikes, the latter half of the story got a lot more serious, though of course the warnings already indicated that. It makes me wonder how Dominique felt while she was dating him and why they stayed together so long, though of course, people do stay with partners who treat them badly and for so many reasons.

I think it's a rather different picture than one would usually get of Lorcan and I now wonder how his twin reacted and if Luna knew.

Really good story.

Author's Response: Thank you! This was actually very difficult to write because it's not my usual style (the letter format) but when I finished I was plaased with it. Regarding the reactions of Lysander and Luna, I do think that Lorcan would've ended up with a few bruises (from his brother), but I am not sure how Luna would've reacted. And Dominique stayed with him simply because she didn't want any other girl to have to suffer. So really she was protecting the female side of Hogwarts' student body. Thank you again for the awesome review!

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