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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi, here for RRT!

I actually read this story a while ago and it immediately went into my favorites. I wasn't able to review then because I knew if I did, everything would just be garbled.

I read this story five times. In a row. I absolutely loved it. Your use of second person is brilliant and the imagery in this is just astounding.

This story is so different from anything else I've read of yours and it's perfect. I love everything about it. Ugh, I don't even know where to begin. I'll probably end up quoting the entire story back to you.

I love each and every word. I love all the art references. I love how everything is so poetic. I love Rose's job. I love Draco. I love the way their relationship progresses. I love the way you've characterized the two of them as well as Ron and Hermione. I love the ending (although it was so sad) Everything was just so beautiful.

Draco's such a complex character and you've written him wonderfully. The way the relationship despite age difference was portrayed was so amazing, it felt magical. All those little details about his wrinkles and his strange behavior...they were wonderful.

Even though the ending was so incredibly sad, there was still that surreal touch to the writing. The second person just embellished that even more.

This story was so powerful and just perfect. I really don't know what else to say. This story touched me in a way that few do. I was left with tears in my eyes when I finished reading. All five times.

I know this isn't a great review, and I'm sorry I haven't touched more upon each of the aspects of the story. I just don't know what to say. Vocabulary is too limited. I loved every word here. Please don't ever stop writing. You are amazing.

~Erin

Author's Response: Hi Erin! Wow, how to respond to this review? I'm so glad you tagged me though because it's so great to hear that you liked it so much!

Haha, yes this was a little different as I have written second person in a while but it was so much fun to get into again. Then it was fun to play around with the arty side of imagery too because it did make me view things differently.

Gah, I can't really think of how to respond to this other than I love you for leaving me this because it made my entire week! It's just so great to hear that you liked Draco and Rose because when writing this I thought everyone would think I was crazy for pairing them together, but just hearing you say that makes me so glad I did.

I'm glad that you liked the portrayal of the age gap too, because I thought there was almost too much emphasis on it and how he was older but it was so great to hear that you liked it!

I left you in tears? Haha, reading that makes me want to start crying too :P Gah, I just want to thank you so much because this review just left me so wedweog (aka unable to describe feeling or know how to respond to this review).

Shh, don't apologise, it was a fantastic, and I thought you touched on a ton of aspects! Thank you so much for this review, two days on I'm still sitting here squealing away like a mad person at it :P

-Kiana


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