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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Laura!

Hmm, Narcissa seems to be a little too fine after her fall down the stairs. I have a feeling that there might be something more to it, perhaps related to Bellatrix given how she seemed to know a lot about it with the size of the cut and the potion she took. I mean, they are sisters so I guess that could be why but I have a feeling it could be more. It was rather sweet how Lucius was now caring for her, as Iíve always liked those two and really like how youíve portrayed them in this story.

I really enjoyed Siriusí next section. My suspicions about Bellatrix possibly being to blame are thickened with the way she and the others were all talking rather secretively and it just seemed all suspicious. I really love how Sirius really wants to solve this crime and make everything alright because that passion in him is really lovely to observe. Then his conversation with Uncle Alphard was really great because I so rarely see them all talking with one another, but this was great. I know I sound soppy but it was just lovely to see someone talk to him and actually enjoy his presence because I do feel sorry for him a lot of the time!

Haha, I had been suspecting for a while now that there might have been something more to Barty and Regulus and seeing all the innuendos Uncle Alphard said strengthens my suspicions. Iíve never actually thought of them as a pairing because I never seem to think of them connected for some reason, but I really like what youíve done with them here and now Iím sort of wishing there is something more to them.

I canít wait to read on because it seems as if Uncle Alphard really is rocking the house with his arrival so I canít wait to see what more he reveals!


Author's Response: Hey Kiana, thanks so much for stopping by! :)

Yeah, she's not too badly hurt... though whether that's a plus point or a minus point is up to you ;) Bella did seem to know a lot, it is perhaps a bit suspicious. Lucius does love her a lot, and is definitely caring to Narcissa, at least. I'm really glad you like them, since there will be more of them coming up! :)

They are all talking secretively, leaving others out and all that! Sirius I think is a pretty passionate person in total - I think he's so emotive and that's both his strength and his weakness, you know? I'm glad you like him, since I know it's not perhaps a normal representation of him! :) Alphard... I wouldn't necessarily count on Alphard to have Sirius' back ;) But he is a fun character!

Mahaha, you're not the first person to say that, and yeah, Uncle Alphard is not really doing anything to suggest otherwise ;) Keep wishing - it may just come true! :P And yeah, they are quite a weird pairing, but I really like them... can't explain it, tbh, I just like how they work together.

Ah, Uncle Alphard is most definitely rocking the boat, so to speak! :)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! :)

Laura xx

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