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Review:toomanycurls says:
Thanks for doing a review swap!! so sorry I've taken so long (work got a bit busy)

The beginning of this chapter is just wow. I'm dying to know who burned what. The what, I'm guessing was a will or other important item. But figuring out who is leaving my wheels spinning.

DUDE! Bella's quips about killing Sirius just sent chills down my spine. Well placed irony.

While she clearly thinks herself better than Sirius, it's so interesting that she's going to him for advice and councel. Maybe she thinks more of him than he lets on. :) Yay for team Siribella (yes, no?)

You know your family is messed up when no one eats for fear of being poisoned...

Can't Voldy wait until after dinner? There are so many demanding boss jokes to make here.

What was on the letter?!!?

I loved this chapter! You're incredible with tension and mystery.


Author's Response: Hey there - thanks so much for the swap, I really enjoyed it! :) We should do another one at some point ;)

Gah, thank you so so much! I really enjoyed writing that section, though it was difficult - writing without giving anything away as to who it is is harder than I thought it would be! ;)

Mahaha, I couldn't resist putting it in when it happened and I thought of the line! I did have a sort of smug, privately amused smile I'm sure :P Yeah, Bella's fun to write and I liked including it! She's not so much as asking him for advice as wanting... something. To talk to him, get him on side (possibly) that kinda thing. They would be quite a good team, haha, and yeah she does think a bit more of him than he thinks. It's sort of a grudging acceptance, lol.

I know! Weird, weird family... but they have good reason to be scared ;)

Ooh, the letter... the letter is important. Very important. Hence I haven't revealed anything much about it straight away. That, and that I like writing cliff-hangers :P

Wow, thank you so so much for that! Thanks for this review in whole - it was such a lovely thing to get! - and thanks again for the review swap! I really enjoyed it! :)

Aph xx

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