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Review:MargaretLane says:
*laughs at Rose rejecting any ideas she can think of because they'd break the rules* She is really her mother's daughter.

*laughs at Albus feeling nervous about crossing Slano's path* That reminds me of my Albus being nervous about facing Blackburn after she sort of freaked out that time. At least Slano had some reason to punish them.

I see Slano's point. It's not really fair if he has an advantage over the other students just because his parents bought him something.

She shouldn't just take their word for it like that. Somebody who only half-knew how to fly could claim they knew and then get into trouble. She doesn't appear to care too much.

And it's a bit unfair to be so judgmental about those who haven't flown. After all, the Muggleborns haven't exactly had much opportunity. I can see why she made a bad impression on them.

"Himself" should all be one word.

That's weird - that she'd tell him she wanted him to stay behind, then tell him to go. She's definitely hiding something, but what, I don't know.

And hmm, he recognises her eyes. Could she be Cho Chang in disguise, I wonder? Or could she be related to somebody he knows?

Author's Response: Thank you again for your review.
I thought that too when I wrote it. Rose clearly takes after Hermione but perhaps not AS studious. I thought that I would say about Alamo having something scary and mysterious about her. I'm glad that you liked it. Yes I didn't know which was more fair when I wrote it. Slano or Albus. I tried to make it quite even. But I also see album's point of view that he wanted to ride his own broomstick.

Yes I tried to make it a bit like she didn't know her stuff - sort of like a supply teacher. She is very mean.

I'll correct 'himself'

You'll have to wait and see!

Thank you again
HEG

:)


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