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Review:Infinityx says:
Hello! I'm here for our review swap.

I love how this story is set immediately after the war, and from Ginny's point of view. You've done a great job at characterizing her and I think this chapter is a wonderful start to the story.

I think you've done a marvelous job at capturing Ginny's grief. It's such a powerful emotion and I love how you've written it. It's nice that you've focused a bit on each of the other Weasleys as well. Bright clothing at the funeral seems just how Fred would have wanted it, and I think it was an amazing idea to include that but of detail.

I love the part where Ginny takes Ron's cleansweep and goes off to fly by herself. I think the Weasleys getting worried about her is such an apt reaction. It must be so hard for them to move on after witnessing so much pain and death.

Aww, Harry's so sweet. He loves her so much. It's sad that Ginny is feeling so insecure. :( And it's so nice that Harry told her about the Marauder's map. That ending was so powerful with all the uncertainty as well as love. This was such a moving chapter overall, and you've done a brilliant job at portraying all the emotions.

There are so many ways the story can go from here and I'm curious to know what will happen next. I'll definitely come back to read more. Keep writing!

Cheers,
Erin

Author's Response: Hi!!!

Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that you think the heart of the characters and their grief were captured well :)

I'm glad you liked the Harry scene, I was a little nervous about what people would think about it.

Thanks so much for saying you'll keep reading it! That really means a lot!

Christy


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