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Review:Kinnu says:
Hey,

I thought it was beautifully written. I had a lump in my throat at the end of it.

Teenage girls definitely think that way and say the same stuff. They look in the mirror and try to find an angle in which they look thin. Trust me, I know.

I like that you initially compared Rose to better looking people. Finally, she didn't resign herself to how she looked but loved the way she was. This, I loved the most. Understanding that fact is like a rite of passage for most teenage girls(Except 'most' people don't have a 'Scorpius'!) and you captured that emotion perfectly.

I found the idea of Scorpius being Rose's best friend very sweet (I don't read much of Next-Gen but I know it's a popular pairing). But I thought a few lines in your story about how they first met or how they became friends or how they're friends even when their parents aren't friends at all would clear a few things. If this is a scene from one of your other stories where they become friends, mention it and ignore me. You know, I for one would sure read it if you included the other story's name.

Keep writing!

Kinnu

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