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Review:Maelody says:
Ok, so I hope it doesn't disappoint you that I chose an older story! I'm not a huge Dramione fan, but I'm trying really hard to open up to the idea of it. I read your summary and saw that it has as sequel, and seeing as how I like reading stories for the long run, I thought this was perfect. :)

Anyway, to start off with, and I want you to know this is a compliment, but I can really see you've advanced in writing from this point to where you're at now with Hoping For A Heartbeat. :) You're doing really well as a writer and it's cool to see the differences!

As for the chapter, I like how you summed up everything about how they moved on after the war. Not so long that it was boring because we know the information already, but just enough to remind us and keep us in track.

I'm really mad that Ron would text (cool thought about Hermione introducing him to phones by the way) about Hermione like that! I always felt like he would tell her off if she made him feel stupid! But I guess putting a ring on it could make everything different. But to go back to Lavender? Ew! Haha. Though it is sort of nice to see her alive in the story. I think JKR pronounced her dead after the war and that always made me really sad :(. All the deaths did. I bet Hermione is regretting giving him that phone now, though!

Well, I'm interested so far! :) I'll read further into it! :) thanks for the opportunity to look through your list! :D


Author's Response: Aww Mae thanks for the nice review!!
Older stories need love too lol!
I plan to come back and edit this story really well.. and the sequel is on Hiatus until I can finish my other Dramione and start up my new story :) I can also see the difference in my talent of writing and it makes me very excited that I am getting so much better. And all of you are the reason why because you all helped me and gave me advice!!! :D Thanks so much for reading!!

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