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Review:Infinityx says:
Hey there! Here for the BvB review battle!

I love your writing style here. It totally captures the different tones of the story, and it has left me curious about what will happen next.

You've characterized Ginny brilliantly. One moment she's just doing her normal routine, and then suddenly it's her nightmare being portrayed. Wow. This was such an eerie chapter. I think it's great that you're writing about her nightmares and the demons that haunt her. This is the first story I've come across that focuses on Ginny's mental disturbances and I think you've done an amazing job at the first chapter.

You've captured the mom essence here really well. It's hard to imagine Ginny staying at home and being a mom though. She always seemed like she wouldn't want to stay indoors. I love all those moments with James. It's incredible, the way you've shifted the mood from something so light and warm, to something dark, and then back.

I like how Hermione and the other Weasleys have also been mentioned in this chapter. I hope there'll be more of an interaction between them in the coming chapters. I hope Ginny will tell someone about her nightmares. Poor thing. :(

I'll definitely be reading on. Great job!

- Erin

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by!

I'm very glad you like my style and Ginny's characterization. It's been interesting "getting to know her," so to speak, and trying to connect with her character during this tumultuous time. I agree that more people definitely need to tackle this issue!

Oh, yeah, I think she's definitely discontented with having to stay at home and play the domestic role. She's more of an action-seeker and she obviously misses her old life on the Quidditch pitch. Unfortunately, right now her life calls for her to stay at home and be a bit calmer, or at least she tries in spite of everything going on in her head. I'm happy you liked the light/dark contrast I described here.

You will see more of Ron, Hermione and the others in the next few chapters, so I hope you keep reading and see what comes next!

Thanks for your kind review, Erin :)

-Amanda


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