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Review:celadon says:
Hi again! Here with my second review!

This was a much more emotional, serious story than the one I just reviewed, which just goes to show how versatile a writer you are. Kudos to writing in second person as well! *Bows down* teach me your skills!

I like the whole concept of 'not judging a book by it's cover' which is what this story seemed to be all about. Lucy was considered the perfect daughter with everything going for her. Yet sometimes even the brightest people have the darkest cores. I really hope that Lucy gets better.

Depression is something that a lot of people face, especially children. It's nice that Lucy has someone like Molly who wants to help her get through it. Most people react in a way similar to that of Lucy's parents. They shocked, angry and embarrassed. It takes a sibling or a friend or an understanding parent to really see the situation from the victim's side and be of some help to them.

This to was a lovely written one-shot. In so few words, you've managed to convey so much with respect to the sisters' relationship, their individual personalities and real life problems. Really awesome job!

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you so much for this absolutely incredible review! It really means a lot to me!

Lo :)

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