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Review:maraudertimes says:

Well this was certainly a more upbeat chapter! Although Harry 'sacrificing' his and Ginny's relationship wasn't all that happy (although it was really true to Harry's canon character). But I do think the best option for Ginny would be to return to Hogwarts, given the choice, even if it meant being separated from Harry.

Although, I suppose with Gwenog Jones coming to pay them a visit, I'm guessing Ginny going back to Hogwarts isn't going to happen? Let me guess: she's going to be drafted for the Holyhead Harpies. Ooh yay!

I really liked the quidditch in this chapter and I think you wrote it quite well. The fact that Ginny made Harry stand in as a keeper made me laugh (especially when you think of the joke 'he's a keeper!'). Although I might have wanted a little bit more description with how Harry plays as a chaser. Just a curiosity thing. :P

This was a really good chapter and I really liked it. One of my favourite parts was Percy reverting back to his old self. But needless to say, this was very nicely done and I quite liked it!

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi again!!

Let me just start my saying that these reviews put a smile on my face that I just couldn't get rid of for whole minutes. Okay, moving on :)

Yes, it was a much more upbeat chapter. Of course, I don't think any of them will ever be okay with or move on from Fred's death. But I do think that they would have eventually been forced to think about other things, what with the wizarding world needing to be rebuilt and whatnot :) And yeah, Harry totally would do that... darn heroic Harry...

Hahaha interesting speculations about Gwenog Jones! I guess we will just have to see once Chapter 3 gets through beta'ing!

It really is a relief to hear that the Quidditch seemed well written :) I wasn't thinking about how it would be received too much, but the positive feedback is very nice to hear. Especially with, hmmm, maybe some upcoming Quidditch rich chapters?? I love the 'he's a keeper'! I wish I had thought of that when writing this chapter! Hmmm, Harry as a Chaser would have been interesting to see! I will keep that in mind.

Thanks so much again for your great feedback! I'm really glad you liked it!


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