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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi! I am so sorry that I'm so late with your review! I'm horrible!

So, your concern was flow, characterization and if it was interesting or not. I loved loved loved the way you had this story flow. I love the way that the girls pranked the boys, and I love the way that the interaction with the Marauders went. I think that you were spot on with the way this story flows from start to finish.

The characterization, I think, is also really well done. I particularly love Remus. I think it was so believably fantastic that he would try to be nice and James and Sirius would make faces behind him. I never really focused on Peter much, but I think he also fits well with how we've perceived him from JK's writing. I love Mandy and Mel, as well. They're a great duo, and I kind of wish there had been a little more Charlotte in there! As for Mel's other roommates, they were hilarious and well-written as well!

Okay, so I guess I just really over-all loved this chapter!

Again, I'm so so sorry it took me so long!

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response: No worries! :D I appreciate the review!

Ah that is so great to hear, I'm glad you like the flow and the sections of the chapter weren't too choppy!

haha yeah, I imagined Remus would be the one who tries to be friendly while his friends are just twits. :p I am so glad to hear that you like the characters. Now that I look back at the chapter I am also wondering why I didn't include Charlotte more! Maybe I will have to go back and add another scene. Something to think about.

Thank you for your amazing review ♥


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