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Review:Maelody says:
Awww! I totally wasn't expecting this to end so quickly! However, it makes sense and it was a job well done. And actually, it was quite enjoying being able to read something quick and enjoyable. :)

So, if I'm correct, it actually is mentioned that Thack is a girl. By the slip of the tongue "ladies" yeah? And the unconventional relationship. I loved the topic on gender, and how it doesn't really matter. You covered it quite nicely.

The whole HEPS thing getting picked up, and how it was mentioned that it was dropped later makes it all better. Heck, the "later" part was enough to warm my heart alone. I like that she is a cartoonist, and Thack is doing something non-ministry organized. It really adds to the whole deal, and it sounds like a cozy life. That picture at the end, the one with Swift, almost made me tear up ;).

It was a truly great story, and I'm glad I got to read it! You did a great job, and I loved every bit of it! Keep doing what you do! :)

~Mae

Author's Response: Hi again! :) Ah, I wish it could have been longer, I just had too many WIPs. Maybe someday. :P

I'm glad you liked it! :D This style was quite new for me so it's great to get such lovely feedback.

Ah, so you took that as saying Thackeray was a girl? ("Thack, hahhaha :P). In my opinion Thackeray's gender is contested, so the poor journalist thought to say "ladies" but then wasn't quite sure if that was right. :P But it's really up to the reader to decide - or decide to not decide. :)

I'm really happy you liked the "later" part and how the story ended for both of them. I liked imagining them living their dreams but also being quite happy and ordinary. Aw, I'm so happy to hear you liked the picture, it felt like the sort of thing Thackeray would really appreciate from Roxy.

Thank you so much for the brilliant review! I really do appreciate it so much and it made my day to get your reviews. You're awesome! :D


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