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Review:Pixileanin says:
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I love how you describe Fleur's feelings for Bill as being "enchanted". It's a little ironic, since she's supposed to be the enchanting one. I guess that's why it stuck out to me. It seems like a great description for the devotion we see in her from canon.

Another phrase you used, "something happens to her that is more than magic" is just beautiful. I think you touched on all the things we know about this couple and brought them together nicely in this lovely one-shot. I really like how Bill acknowledges his family's reluctance to accept Fleur, but deep down, he believes that she will eventually be a part of their family, and even his mother will embrace her one day.

I also love the way that you used the language barrier as a means of describing their feelings for each other. Fleur's love of her own language, and her determination to learn how to express herself in English, and then Bill's attempt to bridge their two worlds by learning French for his very special moment, it brought something more to the piece than if it had just been a straight-up proposal.

Great flow, lovely prose, enticing description and lots of tingly feelings. What more could anyone ask for?

This was an excellent, fluffy, romantic one-shot! I really enjoyed it!

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