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Review:Maelody says:
I hadn't even noticed the updates since chapter one! Sorry it's taken a bit, but I'm here now! :)

This, in all reality, is a powerful chapter. It's like a montage, and though montages are normally short , you don't even realize the length of each section because it has you captured in the whole time. And I just love how you successfully passed the time and we were still updated on all of the important goods. :) Such as the kiss, meeting the Doyle family, and the beautiful scene on the hill.

That hill scene! It was breathtaking and beautiful and calming all at the same time! It was amazing! Great job on your detail and writing right there for sure! I loved it! From the sadness if the thestrals, to the beauty of going and being there. I simply just loved it.

I like that Thack (I'm sticking with that since I butchered it last time haha) isn't gender specific. Though, some part of me wants to see the revelation at the end or something, and another part screams that it would make the story mean so much more if you didn't lol. Oh the workings of an indecisive mind.

Great job! I'll move forth to the next chapter!

~Mae

Author's Response: Hi Mae! :)

Thanks so much for coming back - it was really lovely to get your feedback on the other chapters. :D

I'm really pleased to hear you liked the format of the story and felt it was powerful. I have a tendency to write a LOT so I tried to confine the narrative to smaller sections so this wouldn't turn into a novel. :P

Yay, I'm really happy you liked the hill scene! Hearing it was well written is really lovely, I've actually been on the exact hill I was writing about at sunset so it was mostly based on that, hehe. :) I'm thrilled to hear your comments on it.

Haha, that name is just impossible to spell! I'm glad you liked the gender neutrality, I'm really glad I experimented with that here even though it was challenging. I like how you're conflicted about Thackeray's true gender as well, and whether you want to know or not!

Thanks so much for an amazing review, I'm off to reply to the other one now! :D I really appreciate it!


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