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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
*Now* I can say, whoo! I'm all caught up!

Out of all of the people that I expected to have an issue with going to Paris (*cough* Teddy), I didn't think that it would be Emmaline. I loved that her temper tantrum -- which was quite epic in itself -- was all caused because she didn't think that she could bring Robert to Paris with her. Heheh. Oh kids :D.

Comfortable underwear is an important thing to remember for a 12-hour shift :D. So the test said that she wasn't pregnant...but still, something is off about her illness. Oh gosh, I wonder what it is!

Van sounds remotely how I feel in the morning, but I do *try* to get the wrinkles out :D. Of course, try may be the operative word.

Oh my goodness, that's absolutely heartbreaking. That poor little girl! Right, I forget that her job must be very difficult...there are reasons why I never wanted to be a doctor or nurse. At least she was able to give a little bit of good news that day. Then still...the little girl.

I hope that she's okay!

Oh, anticipation.

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Haha, it's a great feeling, yeah? :)

Teddy, not want to go to Paris? No way! Haha ;) No, poor little Emmaline is just confused to having to switch homes, leave school, and of course Robert behind. At least having Robert there with her will make everything better ;).

Isn't it! A lady must think of these things before starting her day! Heh heh heh, I'll leave you to squirm :p

Van is exactly me in the morning, while Victoire is who I want to be xD. Something tells me Van waited until the last possible moment to wake up, crawled out of bed (maybe possibly in the same scrubs as the night before) and just sort of absent mindlessly Flooed to work ;).

I'll admit, the little girl was a surprise patient on me, too. But I really wanted something to start happening, considering we are the fourth chapter in. :) It helps fill in the blanks, and it definitely added something important for later development. Though I wanted it because I didn't want to glorify being a doctor or nurse. I may not be one, but I've watched television (sitcom and reality) enough to know it is not. Though I'm glad it has added anticipation! :)

Thanks for sticking it out! I know this last chapter was a little long, but it was pretty fun to write. I'm just happy to see someone has gone through all four chapters with me so far! :) again, thank you so much! It always makes my day when I see a review from you, and it makes me want to get straight to writing the next bits. :)

~Mae


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