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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm going to start this off with THERE COULD BE SNOGGING! I haven't even read anything yet but, there could be snogging.

Why is Octavius privy to Voldemort's activities? Is he a fan? See!?! he's not a good fit for Mel!!

WHAT!?!?! Voldemort? Charlotte!?! O.O Oh no! She was doing stuff for Voldemort and and is being tortured and o.o

AND NOW MEL IS FACE TO FACE WITH HIM! Yay! She said not to Voldemort! I LOVE MEL! :( Why did Nathan have to be the one there torturing Charlotte? I'm so glad that Nathan is at least still decent enough to not torture his sister. :-/ is he redeemable?

your action scene and duel is so well written - I'm really jealous.

!!!I was so happy when James, Lily, and Sirius showed up to save the day! oh and Sirius' concern comes out! yay for death eaters! :P ARE THEY TOGETHER?!?! IS THAT THEM MAKING UP! I could hug you if that's true!!

oh yeah, Voldemort is still there. I love Sirius' insistance that he stay and help protect Mel.

Voldemort is such a coward to leave. I'm shocked he'd go so close to Hogwarts like that - he's lucky Dumbledore himself didn't come out and beat him up!!

ah! I can live with the death eaters and Charlotte's injury as long as Sirius and Mel are together again (for now).

Incredible chapter!


Author's Response: Snogging in this chapter?! You have high standards. Maybe I'll rewrite it so Bellatrix is present, and so then Bellatrix and Voldy snog.


Octavius isn't privy to Voldemort's plans, he has no more idea than Melanie does about what's going on in the beginning. He's a good guy actually. But nope not right for Mel ;)

Nathan is in a messy situation for sure... but yeah, part of him is still a decent person. It's definitely not black and white with him, he's more of a grey... more on him later.

Ahhh thank you! I'm so glad you like the action and battle scenes!

It only took a deadly battle with death eaters for them to admit they loved each other :p yes, they did make up as they realized there are much more important things to worry about.

lol yeah, Sirius' heart is in the right place as he wants to protect her, but he's not a whole lot of help since his leg is broken. Now she has to protect him :p They'll look out for each other though, they're a team :)

I thought it seemed like something Voldemort would do, to just leave the battle to his death eaters when its clear he will no longer gain anything from staying. Also as you mentioned he's probably worried about Dumbledore coming to beat him up.

Yep he was trying to get into Hogwarts- I think at this point he'd still have been trying to get his hands on the sword of Gryffindor or some other relic he can turn into a horcrux.

Thank you so so much for your review! ♥

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