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Review:maraudertimes says:

Holy moly, I'm really sad! Fleur and Bill were one of my favourite pairings, since there was such pure love between the two, and a girl most would consider vain and frivolous was such a loving, caring, compassionate woman to the man she loved and who loved her back. And you made me feel that same way in this one-shot, but you also made it so much better and so much worse.

The so much better part because the little flashback type moments were wonderful and beautiful and absolutely stunning. My favourite was when you mentioned that the one line of French that Bill did eventually learn was "Ma jolie femme, comment je t'aime. Comment je vous adore." I kind of 'aw'ed when I read that.

It's so much worse because of how Fleur has devolved, become this person who is filled with anger and rage, and she inflicts this anger and rage upon Bill because he is the only one she knows. Because it seems that something like that would happen and the fact that it would happen to Fleur and Bill is just heartbreaking. But that Bill will stand beside her and not leave her is just amazing, and really reinforces the love that has always been between the two.

This was just lovely and as I said earlier, I'm a little sad now. You've written this so beautifully and I can't thank you enough. You have created something so pure that I am honoured to have read this. So thank you.

Amazing job!

Author's Response: Hi there! :)

Aw, I'm sorry you're sad! :( This story was quite sad to write as well. I'm glad you like the pairing as well, and seeing the wholesome, loving side of Fleur which I think is so important about her character.

I'm so thrilled to know you like the flashback parts as well, as I played around with them quite a bit. I'm happy you liked the French line too, it was a little cheesy but I'm glad it was aw-worthy.

I know, it is so sad but a real reality for a lot of people who suffer from dementia and those who have to see the ones they love go through it. I agree, after Bill and Fleur have been through so much it's so sad that the last years of their lives will end this way. I felt that Bill would be loyal and loving to Fleur as she was to him in return. I really love them as a pairing and as two characters. ♥

Wow, thank you :) This review was so lovely, I really appreciate all your amazing words. Thank you so much! :)

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