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Review:Steven Carnell says:
This is a most interesting journey. A very good treatment of what could happen if it were possible to travel through time. We all do travel through time but it is in one direction and second by second. Very well written, plotted and imagined. Truly excellent.

Author's Response: Yes! you've picked out that important contrast between the "normal" travelling through time - the constant movement forward of linear time - and the time travel that Lily experiences: moving backwards in time, fragmented time, and cyclical time. She achieves self-actualization by living, not linearly, but cyclically, and she sacrifices herself to achieve it.

I'm very pleased to hear that you thought this a good treatment of time travel, and that you liked the story as a whole. Thank you for taking the time to read and review! :D


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