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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
I love it when you update twice in a row. :)


First of all, I'm typing this on my iPod about five minutes before my 8 am class because I just read it and I think I just died a little inside. This chapter was EVERYTHING.

First, Rosin and Brennan and William--yay for awesome Muggles!! Brennan and William sound so cute, the nurse and the librarian, d'awww. :D And Rosin must've been a real handful as a child. Sheesh! She was only teasing, but then... Such sad. :(

Now, I know you'll get plenty of reactions to the mistletoe part, but here's mine: OH MY GOD THEY DIDN'T KISS I'M SO MAD BUT ALSO HAPPY AND SO CONFUSED AT THE SAME TIME. It's like I wanted them to kiss, but I didn't at the same time. And then Ted ran off...

Oh, Andie. You should've realized that you wanted him to kiss you a long time ago. Now you've got him believing that you still think he's "scum," so you're up the creek without your paddle. Really, why is this story becoming the story of my life right now?! Ted doesn't realize that Andie can change, and she doesn't realize that she's changed until it's too late. I feel more feels about this today than I would have last week. Such sad. :(

And then Ted goes all weird!! What's going on?! It's his mysterious disease, but what is the disease?! His hair is silver... Is he a Metamorphmagus of sorts? And then the needle...

Wow. This chapter just improves upon the last one. So much heart wrenching sadness (but that's probably just because I'm stupid). So much drama. So much EVERYTHING.

I love it. Keep doing what you're doing. :)


Author's Response: Dude, that queue was, like, LIGHTNING FAST. But I'm glad, 'cos it means two chapters within a day. YAY. :]

Muggles! Muggles are fun to write. They can't use magic or wave around wands. Silly Muggles. I think I modeled them after people I secretly want to be my apartment neighbors, instead of my current neighbors who have really loud dogs. Lol. Wish fulfillment. I think I can say with absolute certainty that Roisin was definitely a handful as a child. One of those kids who can't go in public without wearing a leash.

D: No, no such sad. I'm sorry that this story is becoming the story of your life currently, 'cos that sounds like NO fun. Tedromeda are not in a good place right now. Sigh. BUT! More is to come, and less of it sad. Maybe. Ish.

I promise that the next chapter contains actual, bona fide ANSWERS to some of the questions concerning Ted. Hurray! Hope to have it to you soon! :)

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