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Review:marauderfan says:
Hdgvufkfhgd best review swap ever because I didn't realise until I clicked on your link that there was a new chapter of this!

Such a good chapter. I really liked the way you wrote the goodbye between Tor and Terry. (I was going to say that I liked the goodbye...but I didn't like the fact that there had to be a secret goodbye at all. So sad, it really does feel like the beginning of the end. I was imagining that scene taking place at sunset, since sunsets are beautiful but feel like the end of something (well, because they are) and are a tad bittersweet. Then I looked back and it actually says morning.. whoops. But I like the sunset-feeling you evoked in that scene. Wow, I really hope that makes sense to anyone other than me.

Agh, I feel so bad for Pyxis. He really is a good person though. For him it's not about which is the right side, but he sticks with his friends and doesn't want to see them get hurt no matter which side they are on. I want to give him a hug, poor guy. I'm glad he and Tor are still friends (ack and I was not expecting that he put the snake in her bed!) Aw, Taurus is happy too. That's good.

This was a very lovely chapter. It was a great combination of bittersweet and nostalgic and sad and still a little hopeful, and stuff like that is my favourite to read :D

Yay for the one year anniversary of posting this story! Its crazy to remember back to the beginning just how different Tor was then. And you were an excellent writer at the beginning but I think you've improved a lot since your early chapters. This fic is such a pleasure to read and I have loved the journey every step of the way. Keep up the excellent work - I am excited for the next six chapters but at the same time don't want it to end. Thankfully there will be a sequel am I right? :D

Author's Response: Hola! :)

Yay! I've been updating this so much lately, with both new chapters and changes to the current ones, I'm not surprised you missed it! :P I'm so happy you liked this chapter!

I'm glad you liked the way the goodbye happened. I definitely know what you mean about the beginning of the end, and it does have a sunset-like quality. :P But also a sort of beginning of a new era quality... ah, now I'm making no sense, but I totally know what you mean!

Oh dear, poor Pyxis is being put through the ringer. Exactly, and he's sort of very Slytherin in that way, where he doesn't see beyond his own needs, but he's a bit of a Hufflepuff as well in how loyal he is and how much he cares about the people he loves. Pyxis the Slytherpuff. :P I'm glad you found the snake thing a surprise, I felt he was so unlikely but it made sense he would do something like that! :)

I'm so glad you liked this. It's an odd mixture of filler and extremely necessary.

Yay! :D I've been going over some of the old chapters and doing minor edits, and it is crazy to see how much both Tor and my writing has changed. Hehe, I agree and I'm so glad you think I've improved a lot! :D

Thanks so much for being an amazing supporter of this story, it really means so much to me and getting your feedback is always fantastic. I feel the same way - I can't wait for it to be over and to have completed a novel but at the same time I love this story and don't want it to end. Yes yes yes sequel!!! :D I'm so excited for it, it's going to be really, really different from GfS in terms of what's happening but I'm excited to get going on it. :)

Thank you for being amazing and for leaving me this lovely review!! :D ♥


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