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Review:toomanycurls says:
Review swap *grumble about stupid relationship twists*

WHY CAN'T THEY JUST BE IN THE CASTLE *sobs* Okay, I have to pull myself together for this review. I just... *sigh* I'm going to focus!

I do like that there are secrets Mel doesn't know yet about Sirius and the Marauders. Has it been a while? I suppose the first part of the school year.

Run away!!!

...does James have clothes on? ... Just wondering.

I'm so glad he there to help get them to safety. Ah! I don't like the questions they'll be asking James. :( :(

I'm glad that Mel and Mandy were at least as understanding as I could expect given their world. Sirius' coolness at revisiting them following the Marauders last year and at this event IS MAKING ME SO MAD!

I like that Sirius is *finally* opening up about his marauder activities and the fall out BUT I HATE THAT HE JUST SET ASIDE THEIR RELATIONSHIP!!

I don't know what to say right now other than FIX IT!!!



Author's Response: Ahh I know, I think this is the point where it becomes evident that I'm not a nice author :p

Um yes, James is wearing clothes. Being an Animagus would be pretty inconvenient if every time you transformed you ended up naked, right? Haha.

Sirius can be a bit of an idiot at times... so can Melanie.

All right, I'm getting my glue so I can fix what I broke. But you've already read the next chapter, so... yeah. :p Anyway, thanks for the swap!

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