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Review:mcdash says:
Even though this was a "filler" chapter, I loved it! You two are so good at writing in first person while keeping the right amount of description in there, and it's probably the best wielding of the POV I've ever read. Gwynn and James' relationship is incredibly complex, and the writing handles it perfectly.

As far as more specific things of the chapter, this line was probably my favorite:

In her hand was a wine glass. (Typical.)

Made me laugh! This was a really great chapter overall, and I'm looking forward to the next. :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH :) Oi, Viv is such a character aha! Thanks for the super nice review and hope you keep reading! Chapter four is about 70% complete :)
~ Maysie


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