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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
While it was my intention to get here before the new chapter was posted...well, I'm here now :D.

Heh, and I bet she's stuffing those cracks with crumbs like it is her job :D. I haven't read many Next-Gen fic, but it makes sense that they would be more in-tune with the Muggle world than the earlier generations (given that they have the opportunity for exposure). Much like the current generation of RL Muggles (heheh), the understanding of technology surpasses the majority of the older generations. Good call.

Oh yes, the mimicking age :D. That has to be a frightening age for a parent...I would have to watch what I say very, very carefully (and then hope that they forget what I say, because I would definitely slip up). Louis, don't anger the Veela women.

Vic is sick :(. Oh gods...she isn't pregnant, is she? *Gasp*

I can imagine it would be a little nerve-wracking to have your child speaking to nothing (the imaginary friend). I would find this particularly unnerving in the wizarding world...you know, with invisibility cloaks and whatnot o.o!

Haha, I love Teddy's reaction to the imaginary friend. "My daughter is already having imaginary boyfriends. I'm going to have to have a talk with this Robert fellow. I don't like the sounds of him." Teddy grumbled. "Just because he's invisible doesn't make him good enough for my daughter." -- That was brilliant, I love that.

This was cute, but I'm no longer caught up like I had thought I would be!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hey! No worries! :) it's just one more chapter ;)

Oh those cracks are her job! Haha it's so funny that you worded it that way , because it has it's own little story later down the line.

Thanks for noticing that! I don't get to read technology a lot in the next-gen fics, and I'm generally questioned on why I do it. But it's exactly what you said. This generation is barely behind our own, so I highly imagine they would be into a lot if things the Muggles are into. :) thanks for noticing!

That was one of my favorite scenes! Luckily, when this happened to me at the daycare I was working at, the word I said was "naughty". So when the child mimicked me it wasn't that bad, but she went around calling everyone naughty and there were a few tears haha. I just love writing Emmaline so much!

Hehe, you'll just have to read on to find out ;).

I was thinking about that xD. But I assure you, Robert isn't a creeper haha. Hopefully he comes around chapter five or six more and you'll laugh about all this ;).

I'm so glad you loved Teddy's response! I can't help but think he's the most amazing dad, so the scene just put a huge smile on my face. :)

Like I said, it's just one more chapter, right? Haha well, rather you like it enough to stick with it or not, I'm glad you've come this far! It means a lot to me, and it's so good to see that this story has such a positive outlook! :) thank you so much for returning all three times, and I can't wait to read further into your story as it comes along as well! :) Again, thank you so much! It really, honestly makes me so happy!

~Mae


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