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Review:Lululuna says:

Okay this chapter made me laugh, almost cry, scowl at the computer screen and say "oh thank god" really loudly all in the space of one chapter. AHH! I can't believe that the Aurors did that to Sirius and the others (and that you did that to us readers! :P) but it's such a relief that it was just a test. Really. I had completely bought it.

I was so angry when Marlene died, and with the title being so ominous... I had also cursed Remus' name a few times so now I feel a little silly about that and for being so angry and sad about Florence last chapter. :P Woops! And now that I think of it, this is completely the sort of insane thing Mad-Eye and co. would orchestrate. I liked Scrimgeour's explanation of how they came up with the Serpent Sworn too - it makes a lot of sense and of course we were all convinced it had something to do with Voldemort and Slytherins.

You wrote the action scenes so flawlessly, I'm very impressed! :) This was an amazing chapter and such a relief, and I can't wait to see where the story goes next! :D

Author's Response: Haha, it was a very interesting chapter, as far as ups and downs. :P I know. :S It was a pretty awful test, and I'm glad you bought it; that was what I intended. :P

I know; I felt guilty for 'killing' her, but I knew that neither she or Sirius would stop fighting or running unless something happened to the other... so she had to be dealt with. :S Florence's 'death' was a redemption thing as much as anything else. The ramifications of that will be clearer next chapter. :)

It is - completely cruel, and designed for a specific purpose. :P I'm glad the explanations made sense; I wanted to do it justice, haha. :)

Thank you! :D Haha, it is a relief to have that part over. :P You'll find out on Sunday. :)

Thank you so much for the review!

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