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Review:maraudertimes says:

See, now this is a perfect example of character development. You started off with a scared, vulnerable, innocent 13 year old boy, and by the time he reached 15, he was a stone cold, rock hard, vengeance seeking man.

It was horrible to read about Fenrir's Uncle Ivan's tasks and threats and tortures. The man in absolutely horrendous. But the worst was how you described the transformation. It is one of the best I've read yet and I think it perfectly correlates with the canon information we have at our disposal.

You really created a stunningly scary piece that makes me feel bad for Fenrir at first, but as it goes along, his madness grows with him until the end where he is harsh and unyielding in his search for freedom and independence, and most of all revenge on those who looked down upon him and forced him into that situation.

This was an amazing piece and you wrote it wonderfully!

Author's Response: Thanks again for your wonderful reviews.

It was difficult in a way to incorporate both the fact that the challenge was about making the character sympathetic, while at the same time keeping him in character, so I had to show how he developed from a young, rebellious teenager into a cruel and evil man.

Really glad you liked the description of the transformation and the story in general.

Thanks again.

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