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Review:toomanycurls says:
Review swap!

There's so much in this chapter!

I'm desperately curious about what Al is planning for school as it destroys the school. I was interested by his sudden outburst of participation in Potions. He really does present a challenge as a student in terms of out-stripping the prof's own knowledge and depth. James and Albus' exchange had me a bit mesmorized - they're quite at odds with one another. It must be frustrating for James (and Al) to have a brother who is so different from each other. I love having Scorpius as a cronie - it's a wonderful switch to see a Malfoy as the henchman rather than the head guy.

Rose's plight in this chapter was almost tragic. I do feel the worst for her as she's being forced to act on behalf of The Head and is doing things she'd rather not do. :( Going back to Malfoy as a henchman, his role of almost stalker-y devoted guy to Rose is quite adorable.

Rose and Albus' conversaton is just golden. There's the mistrust and borderline admiration of each other. They hate that they like each other and despise that they're all the other has. After what you've shown of Harry's relationship with Al, I'm not sure why he'd want to bring Harry back if not just to kill him again.

Excellent chapter!

-Rose

Author's Response: James and Al really are opposites haha, and I'm glad you enjoyed their conversation. I remember it being really difficult to write.

Excellent guess on Al's motivations! You'll just have to see.

Thanks for the review!


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