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Review:keyty says:
Oh, I'm so glad she's going to see the therapist. I was afraid she would be defensive and wouldn't want to go.

I love how calm everything seems to feel. There's no real 'drama' caused by pettiness, it's very similar to the books, instead of the YA novel feel a lot of fics have (not that that's bad, I just like that this is different). Everyone is starting their families, kind of in their little own worlds. It's very quaint. I wish we could have seen more of Ron, but maybe in another chapter.

Okay, I can't wait any longer, on to the next one!

Author's Response: Yeah, she's looking for a way out, and therapy seems like a good enough avenue. We'll have to see if it actually goes well...

I definitely agree; I felt like the calm was more realistic and actually heightened the creepiness a bit more because the transition is so drastic. Ron will crop up again in the future. I'll have to see if I can find a way to write him into a more substantial role later on in the story.

Thanks for another sweet review!

-Amanda


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