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Review:keyty says:
Hmm, this is a really interesting first chapter. I like that you're showing Slytherins in a new light. Obviously, we all know that not all Slytherins are evil, but that is rarely how they are portrayed in fics. I especially love how even at a young age Melanie is questioning her father's purist beliefs. It really shows that not every Slytherin at the time supported Voldemort. I also love the character development you are already showing. As a first year, Melanie openly uses the word Mudblood, but by her sixth year she refers to it as unkind.
This is very interesting. I'm excited to see how it continues.

Author's Response: Hi there! I am so glad you think this is an interesting start! Yeah, I think Slytherins are often showed from other houses' POVs so they get shown as very one sided which, as you said, not all of them are evil and there's quite a range of personalities there.

I am really glad the character development already seems evident. I think at the very beginning she was still kind of parroting her father about Mudbloods, but once she got to know one and had to think for herself, she changed.

I'm so glad you are interested in the story and I do hope you continue! Thank you so much for this wonderful review!


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