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Review:marauderfan says:
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Aditi! This was so good!! I really love the way you wrote Narcissa's loneliness and emotions, they were very powerful. The Malfoys are such interesting people with so many layers, and you have written their post war relationship so well. It's so sad, and I could really feel for Narcissa. She seemed very realistic to me - she must have gone through so much and having her family ripped apart like that with her husband in prison and her son wanting nothing to do with them.,, ugh so sad. Her bittersweet reflections on happier times in her life were wonderful too and only added ro the contrast to what her life has been reduced to as all the recent memories are heartbreaking.

And the ending... I was so glad Lucius wanted to see her again, and that they got to speak to each other, despite such sad circumstances. :( :( So many feels in this story. I doubt all my gushing here is even making sense. But I loved this story!!

Author's Response: Hello!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am pleased you liked the way I wrote Narcissa's emotions and her relationship with Lucius. It's great to know you found her realistic. Indeed, she was at a sad stage in her life here. I am glad you liked the reflections as well.

I liked writing the ending too, and felt quite sad while doing so, and I am happy you liked it too. All your gushing does make sense and I loved your review too, so thank you =)


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