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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Aha, you had me there. I definitely thought that something was wrong...but, no-- everything is fantastic :D. That was a nice little twist there.

Cross Hospital? Heheh, that was cute. I love the flaws that Victoire ultimately has: the having a child out of wedlock, barely passing her N.E.W.T.S, working too much, Teddy not being around all the time, having a quirky friend who sometimes pushes the boundaries on friendship -- they are all spectacular, really. She's definitely an interesting character, and I'm super excited for her that she obtained a position in the job she wanted :D!

I also think that you have captured little Emmaline quite well. The best thing about writing children is their innocent naivety about all matters-- while she was worried about her mother's excitement, as soon as her fear were diminished she went about her business. The child-like way of explaining things, and of course "all the colors!"-- it's all just really lovely.

Oh awesome, Van's going too! It's always fantastic when you get to bring your best friend along with you :). Erg, something about the way Victoire said that Teddy would be okay with it gives me the feeling that he is not going to be so much okay with it.

Whoo! I was wrong! He's totally okay with it!

Aww, this was a super sweet chapter! I loved it!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad I had you squirming up until that point. :) yeah, things look up for Victoire pretty well for a while.. She deserves it.

I'm glad you like Vic. I'm working hard at making her not so one dimensional. I want her relatable, and I want people to recognize that the next generation is just about in our time frame. They're very similar to us. That's why I like next gen so much. :)

I love writing Emmaline! I babysit a lot, so I'd like to think that helps. She's just so adorable, and I hope people come to see her little quirks. She's a bright child, but I've snuck a few lisps and slurs in there because she knows how to try and act cute to try and get her way ;). I just wanna point that out now so her speech isn't confusing later haha. :)

Remember those plans I said I have for Van? Just wait ;)

Yeo! Teddy is totally OK with it! I wanted to show just how much he loves and supports her. I was going to have him have an issue with it, but I didn't think it would make much sense since they spend so much time apart anyway. It wouldn't change much except for the summer living arrangements.

I'm so glad you like it still! :) thank you so much for the review, and I hope it grows on you as much as it has grown on me! :) it makes me happy to see your reviews!

~Mae


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