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Review:looneylizzie says:
Omigoodness! I've been a terrible terrible reviewer. I'm in love this story so much, but I've been so busy I'm just catching up!

But, I decided I'm going to leave you a review for every chapter with my reactions to it...because...well, because I can. And I LOVE THIS STORY!

Ok, here we are:
1. Hehe, Emma and Vida's mini elemental battles in class. I bet Al is kicking himself for not noticing all of this before.

2. Awww! Rose and Scorpius cuteness! Although, poor Rose, stop torturing your boyfriend! Breaking bones isn't very nice.

3. Oh man. Do ditzy teenage girls really have to fawn all over Harry? Like, really? Why does being famous do that? Ugh!! (Note; this is not a commentary over whether or not you included this...it's just a reaction to the fact that it's a very valid, although ridiculous, occurrence.)

4. Oh man, the idea of George in charge of the fireworks made me giggle. Also, that that is what made Vida decide to come. She's clearly got good judgement. I knew I liked her for a reason.

5. Whoa! Of age? Bending Dances! SO COOL! I like this so so so much! That's just so awesome...and super adorable. Does Al get to dance with her? Hehehehe. That'd be SOOO CUTE!

6. D'AAAWW! Emma and Hugo adorableness. Oh Hugo, that's what you get for letting the Avatar draw on you with a permanent marker.

7. Go for it Vida! I'd play with his hair too! Mmmm, super yummy.

8. Ooh! More about the bending world now! I'm excited that they're integrated into society, and I love that they've sort of got this whole underground city like thing going on. Just like Magicians have it. That's cool.

9. WHOA! I like this part about bending and magic! Definitely something to expand on! Way cool! I'd love to see what sorts of powers these three might gain from the mix of magic and bending. Sort of like superpowers! Although, less cheesy. But, Vida being able to control sound just through air is WAY cool. It makes me wonder what else Emma and Nikita would be able to do. Maybe use magic to bend telepathically? Take the elements they bend and add a magic twist to them? Nikita could heal with fire? Emma could breathe underwater, without needing to cast a spell or bend?
I dunno, I'm rambling...moving on!

10. Em TALKED TO HER DEAD GREAT UNCLE for TWO HOURS, and acts like it's no big deal?!?! WHAT? That's wayy cool. The magic must definitely help her with the spiritual side of things.

11. HA! Love that her great-grandmother was insulting Hufflepuffs. LOVE. IT! I laughed for a good five minutes at that.

12. I want to fly now.

13. Nice name for the glider. Love Greek Mythology!

14. Oh. Wow. Vida's mom is scary! Yikes! RUN VIDA RUN!!!

Hehehe... so, enjoy this long review! I kinda like doing this...it's fun, and I'm LOVIN' this story! Keep up the good work!
LL

Author's Response: Its quite fun reading these long reviews, it made me laugh! Thank you!

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