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Review:Kinnu says:
Hey,

I loved the start of your story. Unconventional, but hey... it had me hooked as soon as I read it.

I've read it twice but I didn't understand the last sentence:
"Perhaps my stealth skills are improving after all." Could you please explain?

Anyway, I loved your writing style. On my favourites!

Happy writing and looking forward to reading more of your stories,

Kinnu

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this very kind review!

Well, we know from canon that stealth was one of the areas in which Tonks wasn't exactly top Auror material. She's a bit clumsy and she has a vibrant personality, both of which make it tough for her to blend in. With that line, I meant to show that she was able to sneak onto the lift and follow Moody up to the correct location without giving herself away, which she saw as a sort of personal stealth-related victory. It underscores that she is cut out to be an Auror after all. Hope that makes sense.

Glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks again!

-Amanda


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