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Review:MargaretLane says:
*grins* Being Irish, I think it is seriously awesome you've had the principal tell them about the old Irish and Scottish version, with the old Scottish name, rather than the more Americanised version. Since Hogwarts is in Scotland, it makes a lot of sense. As kids, we called it trick-or-treating, though I'm pretty sure we didn't even realise that was something you were supposed to say.

Don't the seventh years get to go to the dance?

The formatting on this chapter has got a bit messed up by the look of it. There are huge gaps between each paragraph.

And I like the name Omega. This Alpha guy really isn't going to much trouble to hide his and his son's identity, is he? It sounds like he wants to be known, so he'll be feared.

And I'm REALLY wondering what MIM could mean. I'm guessing it's significant since you are keeping it such a secret.

And I DEFINITELY know what you mean about being pleased when somebody is confused by various clues. It's always good to know the suspense is working.

I really like the way Albus and Severus want to be something completely different for Halloween. One of my best friends in primary school was a twin and I remember before her Confirmation, she was talking about how they definitely weren't getting similar Confirmation outfits.

Hmm, that's interesting, the possibility of Gaunt being a Parseltongue.

And now you've shed some doubt on whether or not the Gaunts are who they are claiming to be. It is POSSIBLE Alpha is just pretending to be related to Voldemort to create fear, but I don't know. If Omega is found to be a Parseltongue, that'll give some credence to the claim.

Rose is definitely suspicious that Daegan is a werewolf too. I suppose it's hardly surprising when he is going to be absent for the full moon and seems to know a lot about werewolves. Of course, now the question is whether she's right or not. I think she probably is, but you might well have something else up your sleeve.

Author's Response: I'm Scottish and every Halloween I go guising, not trick-or-treating. I thought it would be a bit more interesting that way, and I wanted to get a riddle in there somehow. :)

Did I forget the seventh years? *slaps forehead* Victoire will be so upset!

Formatting, for some reason, has only just started to become a problem, despite the fact that I haven't changed the way I upload stuff. Once the chapter for a different story has been validated I'm going to go through this one and do a big edit.

You think she's right? So does she! Of course, Voldemort also thought he was right when he started killing people, and Harry thought he was right when he started chasing the Horcruxes...Not that helpful but I can't start giving away plots can I? :)

Thanks for the review!

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