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Review:Nicole Swift says:
Charlie is such a Pr*ck. He steals one brother's girl just to show he can and sends a note to rub it in his face that they just had sex. He sleeps with his other brother's wife knocking her up while never seeing or talking to his wife and "son". Gets aggressive when his "son" rightly has no idea who he is. Then he ticked at his family for being there for his son and spending time with them. Hoping you don't try to make him more likable because I can't see having a good excuse for how he is acting. I feel just a little sorry that Hermione tricked him, but that has no bearing on most of how he is acting. If he know Titus is not his I might see him being unavailable. The rest is just horrible.

I am surprised that Hermione would agree to move to Romania with him. after he has ignored her and the baby, and with him sleeping with someone else.

Don't get me wrong and think I am hating the story, I am hooked. Just had to vent about how he is making me feel. Read up to 14, hoping for fast updates.

Author's Response: Just a warning: there will be good Hermione/Charlie scenes in the future, simply for the sake of laying a foundation for the present events. I am so glad you hate him though. That's what I'm going for. And I am certain that by the end you will hate him even more. *maniacal laughter*

As for Hermione agreeing to move to Romania, keep in mind that 80% of her decisions are solely based on keeping appearances and making her son's life as normal as possible.

I am hoping to get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Thank you for reviewing. I love the feedback. Make sure to read and review the next chapters.
-DahliasQuill


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