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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:

Okay, had to get that out, I am like trying to power read this so I can get to chapter 41 and read that awesomeness!! Oh Dom, what have you gotten yourself into? Holy canoli that's A LOT of alcohol. She's an ambitious one. I love how good of a friend Fliss is. I love how she doesn't want anyone to get hurt, but through all of that can see what is the right and wrong thing to do. I think it's brilliant the way you've written her. She's really an honourable person, and I can't wait for her to tell Albus. I could slap Scorpius for being such a prat, blurting out her secret, judging her, judging Dom.

Go Albus! Punching Scorpius in the face! Yeah! I mean, I'm sad to see my ScoRose broken up, but you can't get everything you want. Go Rose! Love her, I mean, I wish she hadn't slapped Dom, but Dom deserved it. Albus is so cute, comforting Rose. I can just see it in my head.

Quick little thing I caught:

When Albus goes into the room of requirement to calm Rose down, she says "We've been together four years and a half years, why now?" I think you mean to say "We've been together four and a half years..." So just cut out that first 'years' and you'll be good, love!

A face from the past? Flick's mom? Interesting, can't wait to read it!

Great chappie as usual! Loved it!

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response: Hey!

Updates are everywhere I know! I've been a busy bee.

Dom's got herself in a right mess, I know.

I love writing Flick and in some ways I think her whole viewpoint on the situation is similar to what I would be like. Her tell Al is really soon...

Poor Scorose indeed, but who knows what the future holds for them ;)

Ahh oopsie, thank you for pointing that out, you're a star and I'll change it asap.

Hehe, wait and see.

Thank you so much my dear.

Much love,
Sophie x

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